Thursday, April 8, 2021

Horse truck William

Today I was learning how to add in what we saw into our writing

I enjoyed what we are doing this to make our writing more interesting

I found it challenging to do paragraphs

My digital learning object shows a horse truck

Next time I would change some words

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora William,
    I saw the horse truck parked outside the school and wondered who owned it and why it was at a school. Now I know! Thank you for sharing your writing.
    I found it very hard to read your writing. Are you able to edit your slide and make the words stand out so we can read it? Maybe making the words a different colour might work and to BOLD the text.
    from Mrs Torrie

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  2. kia ora William I like it how you got a background of a horse truck.have
    you tried doing different color text boxes.it reminds me of my mums old horse.From Mason

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